Your topic is good and your summary is well done. I would like to see sone of your perosnal thoughts within it next time. The big issue is that you didn't reply to any students comments which is worth 30 points."
"Accident stories are not the best stories to do as they just don't lead to good discussion. You summary is well done but I wouild like to see more of your thoughts and opiniuons within it. Also be sure to reply to students comments as its worth 30…"
"Good topic and one that hasn't been done so +5! I do think your summary could be a bit longer and include more of your thoughts and opinions. While you did a great job replying, be sure to comment back on three different days next time. "
"Great topic choice Jayden! I think your title could have been better. The bit issue is that you didn't reply to any student comments which is worth 30 points. Your story was also posted two days late."