"Be sure to comment more frequently and be sure to proofread to eliminate errors. You summary is also a bit brief. -5 late."
"Be sure to capitalize words in your title and also include personal thoughts within your summary. I also think you could have commented more. -10 late"
"Good topic choice but be sure to use paragraphs to better effect and also be sure to capitalize words that should be. Also be sure to hyperlink to your story. You also didn't reply to any student comments which is worth 20 points.