Saturday afternoon at 3 a shooter, in Odessa Texas, had open fired out in the public. It all had happened when the gunman had simply had made a left turn without a signal. There is still no motive as to why the gunman had fired. 8 were people killed, three officers were shot, with 22 also wounded. One of those that were killed was a postman, Mary Granados. The shooter was killed, and has been identified by the local law enforcement. His identity has not been released out to the public, because the Odessa police cheif said "I am not going to give him any notoriety for what he did." The police cheif also thinks that if the gunman was not stopped there could have been more causitlies.
https://www.foxnews.com/us/texas-shooting-rampage-mail-carrier-among-killed
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